We had survey on exhibition and collected the answers of it then have added a sentence from the questionaire to these strings.

I have used some of the answers for my individual strings.Also we used A level students strings and messages for our project.

We had a crit about our Marine Organism “Siphonophores.Some crits have about the whole sculpture a bit messy and unity however messages are quite clear include letters are larger and wider.

We agreed that this art project is not kinetic art due to the moving problems.We thought about the combination of the whole material is not problematic instead of the installment of the ratchet.

The interface is engaging and remarkable.For me it is too strong a curatorial decision to made it bigger things and hang this installation art where i’m putting my intentions into the up.We have worked incredibly well together.

On our crit we discussed our questions as the combination of the materials for the spine and the rest.May be problematic?It was not problematic but we organised the strings wider, separately with measure to the mirror spine to read the messages clearly using ratchet was hard while installation up to the ceiling,we sorted them out .

Also we discussed if it is kinetic art however not due to the moving problem, we thought if we hang between trees outside then we changed our mind our after fisibility outside.